Poems as Places

During the Southern Utah Book Festival, poets Paisley Rekdal, Danielle Dubrasky, and Simmons Buntin led the workshop “Real Locations, Imagined Selves,” whose focus was on defining a sense of place through words and documenting a place through poetry.

The conversation was much more far-reaching than expected. Poetry of place tends to focus on physical places, as in Richard Hugo’s Triggering Town or Wendell Berry’s poetry, which is closely tied to the specific farms he’s played in and worked on over the course of his life. Both Hugo and Berry’s approaches to place seem to be consistent with James Galvin’s notion of what a poet of place is, which is someone who situates himself in place in order to lose himself in it.

Rekdal discussed something similar to Galvin’s concept in the workshop, but she also talked about many other layers of writing about place—ones that augment and challenge the notion of place itself. She used the term palimpsest to describe places and our experiences of them, noting that places are layered in terms of their geographies, histories, uses, cultures, and more. Other layers include the ways in which places inform us psychologically, mentally, and politically.

The question implicit in this discussion is this: How can we begin to examine the layers of a place in order to more deeply know it, each other, and ourselves?

Partway through the workshop, an attendee said his body feels like a place, one that’s being politicized and treated like a territory. This was a powerful moment. The idea of the body as a place, one that can not only be inhabited by the self but also invaded, in a sense, by others, is disconcerting. When that type of invasion occurs in a physical space (someone’s community, their school, their place of worship, and so forth), body and space intersect, making both feel less safe. Here, we see layers of place building up and around the human body within the social, political, and physical elements of a place.

Rekdal says much of how place is defined is through bodies, and much of how bodies are being called into or excluded from a place is racial. She then discussed how the Chinese in the West could become white or reject becoming white depending on whether they wanted to be part of the United States. The idea she touched on is that, like places, race isn’t static. Bodies aren’t static. They’re all processes that are in flux and that meld into or layer over one another—and that sometimes collide with each other.

(I want to add that bodies are also excluded from places because of discrimination based on ethnicity, gender, sexuality, disability, age, national origin, and sex.)

Place is not just where you inhabit. It inhabits you, too, Rekdal said as the conversation began reaching toward the ineffable. I sometimes think about places as hauntings, she added.

She notes that we can be drawn to places we’ve never been before, perhaps because something inside us may be encoded to seek out a place and call it home. Or perhaps we seek out a place and immediately feel the atrocities and suffering that occurred there, such as at the Topaz Internment Camp Museum in Delta, Utah, where Rekdal gives tours as the director of the American West Center.

Whatever the reason, humans seem to have the capacity to carry a sense of place within us that’s larger than life and longer than the human lifecycle.

             Nothing natural but made
             in the beauty of this place. To create a home,
             we imported trees and water, we slashed
             and burned to excavate a state where nothing
             lived, nothing ruled us, and yet in all this nothing
             we were subject to the rules nothingness demande

Those lines are from Rekdal’s poem “Soil,” which appears in West: A Translation. She says places create relationships and help us develop empathy for each other. The forging of community from hardship is evident in the lines above and is part of the universal human experience.

The takeaway is that places can’t be places in any human way of understanding and experiencing them without our presence in them: the communities we build, the bonds we create within and because of place, and the ways in which we come to know place.

Wendell Berry says we’re losing our connection with place because our use of our places is greatly reduced from what it was in the past. Of course, he means literal places and a very specific type of past use of those places.

Perhaps Berry’s not imagining place as broadly as possible. As Buntin pointed out at the end of the workshop, imagination itself is a place. Imagine that. If what we imagine is a place, then the products of those imaginings, such as poems, are places. We really can create worlds out of words.

I wonder what you all think about where we are with regard to our relationships with places in any or all senses of the term? Is our understanding of places—like places themselves—a multidimensional process rather than a half-static relationship in which only human understanding changes, not the very idea of what constitutes a place?

Asked another way, are we as deeply connected with place as ever, even if we haven’t quite identified all our places as places: interior, exterior, past, present, analog, digital, elemental, philosophical, built, imagined, and so forth?

Halinen-Huth

For two decades, I’ve maintained a list of quotes I like by poets, writers, and thinkers I find interesting. This post is part of that series. All posts in the series are organized alphabetically. Some poets and writers have their own dedicated pages.

Henceforth, may your heart be three trinities of birdcall and birdsong and caw. — Jeremy Halinen

Grief makes one family / of us all. — Sam Hamill

If you love poetry, you are charged with finding poetry that helps you change your life. — Sam Hamill

In that insight of inter-being, it is possible to have real communication with the Earth, which is the highest form of prayer. — Thich Nhat Hanh

Nothing can be by itself alone, no one can be by himself or herself alone, everyone has to inter-be with every one else. That is why, when you look outside, around you, you can see yourself. — Thich Nhat Hanh

This body is not me. / I am not limited by this body. / I am life without boundaries. / I have never been born, / and I have never died. Look at the ocean and the sky filled with stars, / manifestations from my wondrous true mind. Since before time, I have been free. / Birth and death are only doors through which we pass, / sacred thresholds on our journey. / Birth and death are a game of hide-and-seek. So laugh with me, / hold my hand, / let us say good-bye, / say good-bye, to meet again soon.We meet today. / We will meet again tomorrow. / We will meet at the source every moment. / We meet each other in all forms of life. — Thich Nhat Hanh

Writing shit about new snow
for the rich
is not art.

— Kobayashi Issa, trs. Robert Hass

Girl sprawled on a couch, a girl on a horse, girl in a mirror. / The orchid’s tender stem in a hipped-shaped vase. / How long before the vessel breaks? — Terrance Hayes

This torso is a hard seed, / this mouth a lodestar guttered. / The greater sky above this one is the dream / we ever wake from, and remember — Rebecca Hazelton

I write by hand (first draft) / because it’s harder to lie / dissemble or distract / when my body’s involved — Mark Hein

Each moment stands under an enormous vertical and horizontal pressure of information, potent with ambiguity, meaning-full, unfixed, and certainly incomplete. — Lyn Hejinian

It was a brilliant cure, but we lost the patient. — Ernest Hemingway

Write hard and clear about what hurts. — Ernest Hemingway

I’ve, I’ve got a bone / to pick and a crow to pluck. / I’ve got my tail tucked, wound / to lick. I prefer not to talk. / I said, I prefer not to talk. — Andrea Henchey

How can I make it beautiful? That’s always my goal. — Sara Henning

Nights I give myself / to memory’s epithet, your chin hard / on my clavicle, your hands / pinioning my wrists to the pillow / as though they were nectar- / containing spurs of delphinium — Sara Henning

tell me the story / of the body we carry with us. — Sara Henning

Which of us stays at her guttural refrain for days, though our love was never so close to our hunger? What is love but a set of urges? Hold the nape of the neck just so—carry the pieces of the body just so— — Sara Henning

The noisy rooks pass over, and you may / Pace undiverted through the netted light / As silent as a thrush with work to do — John Hewitt

This is where we are at right now, as a whole. No one is left out of the loop. We are experiencing a reality based on a thin veneer of lies and illusions. A world where greed is our God and wisdom is sin, where division is key and unity is fantasy, where the ego-driven cleverness of the mind is praised, rather than the intelligence of the heart. — Bill Hicks

Don’t try to sell anything door-to-door would be my advice, particularly your poems. — Bob Hicok

You never really know / if you’ve done any good with your life, / so why not act as confused / as everyone else — Bob Hicok

My mother’s smile a swing-bridge / to an island city, her voice a parachute / that possessed everything it is possible to know. — Alan Hill

I remember that eight-year-old boy / who had tasted the sweetness of air, / which still clings to my mouth / and disappears when I breathe. — Edward Hirsch

And within my body, / another body … sings; there is no other body, / it sings, / there is no other world — Jane Hirshfield

I don’t want to scream forever, / I don’t want to live without proportion / like some kind of infection from the past — Tony Hoagland

Let it keep falling / Until maybe it lands in the basin of the hips / Let the Earth hold it / Like a giant seed / That’s been waiting to find the soil — Thomas Holmes

Throw out the Cartesian dualism and bio-reductionism AND psychological reductionism. Our minds are embodied, emotive, enacted, socially embedded, and extended through tools, physical and symbolic. No good mental health treatment neglects any of these aspects. — Thomas Holmes

First you will come to the Sirens who enchant all who come near them. If any one unwarily draws in too close and hears the singing of the Sirens, his wife and children will never welcome him home again, for they sit in a green field and warble him to death with the sweetness of their song. There is a great heap of dead men’s bones lying all around, with the flesh still rotting off them. — Homer

But the newborn rabbits— / no, they were not so lucky. They didn’t live / for forty years like the crane does. They saw only / grass and a few flowers, maybe the sky / and a black vine moving quickly, a dark mouth. — Patricia Hooper

It is fascinating to see into other minds, especially across culture. It has given me the impression that experience and perception are much more commonly shared than doctrines of cultural difference often suggest.  — Paul Hoover

Resurrect my day and night, the fire of each star. — Kate Houck

I always felt like reading a poem was an experience analogous to that of encountering language. Sure, there’s persona, and the world of the poem, and voice etc etc etc. But it’s all made out of language, and the language is the first thing I am made aware of. — Lisa Howe

What happened in our house taught my brothers how to leave, how to walk / down a sidewalk without looking back. / I was the girl. What happened taught me to follow him, whoever he was, / calling and calling his name. — Marie Howe

Truth is / we have been long upon the trail / of this disaster, this smile of stove in boats / and grit along the shore. Does everyone / come home at last / to ruin? — Christopher Howell

At night / deer drift from the dark woods and eat my garden. / They’re like enormous rats on stilts except, / of course, they’re beautiful. — Andrew Hudgins

A hunger catches in our throats. Desire hikes up. / The night swims, fluoresces. This cannot be cured. — Amorak Huey

Saving superpowers for the last act / is such a classic mistake. My body has no plans & no prototype, / though I still expect to rush in & rescue myself. — Amorak Huey

I caution against communication because once language exist only to convey information, it is dying. In news articles the relation of the words to the subject is a strong one. The relation of the words to the writer is weak. (Since the majority of your reading has been newspapers, you are used to seeing language function this way). When you write a poem these relations must reverse themselves: The relation of the word to the subject must weaken—the relation of the words to the writer (you) must take on strength. — Richard Hugo

In a poem you make something up, say for example a town, but an imagined town is at least as real as an actual town. If it isn’t you may be in the wrong business. — Richard Hugo

Semicolons indicate relationships that only idiots need defined by punctuation. — Richard Hugo

in less than a small / touch I crumple down, and the tea / I am holding is immersed in the / puddles, and my body turns / the waters fragrant. — Tung-Hui Hu

Most days are crushed / breathless by something far away, / too beautiful, true in a fiery / and glorious way. — Tom C Hunley

What killed this man? / The chorus answered, Bare, bare fat. — Zora Neale Hurston

By this pond-sheened curve of trees and sunset/cloud, I hush. I let quietude creep closer, a wild thing nosing / at my heart — Alison Hurwitz

I want to say that / home’s the place you are: a branch, a rubber tire, abandoned cedar shingles, / bones. We’re those that always find a substrate we can cling to. — Alison Hurwitz

This is what poetry is now: the presentation of self, the presentation of words (and of images [and of images of words]), links to other content, self-promotion, and the integration of poetry into the entirety of one’s personal (and sometimes also professional) life. All of this is good and all of it is dangerous. — Geof Huth

This is what a black bear sounds like. A low deep moan, like I have disappointed him yet again. The yard is littered with sticks. A winter’s harvest collected one at a time. How we count the days. I am running out of hunger. Why do we cry? What does it mean to lose a person when we are all temporary anyway? It is an irrational reality, how beautiful a hewn beam is. How one thing can become another. — Leo Hwang